Corporate Social Negligence!

a poet n a critic!

Posted in Uncategorized by clash on August 5, 2005

cr: “hey, last time when we met u showed a new piece written by you, right?”

po: “for heaven sake its not a piece, it is a poem”

cr: “ok.. ok… do you have it with you?”

po: “ummm.. ahem… i dont think so, i write it whenever i feel like, on small bits of paper, sometimes they remain with me, sometimes i loose them”

cr: “but that one was good, i thought i will get it published for you,you can have some coins clinking in your pocket”

po: “wait, i think i remember that poem, i can write it down for you”

cr: “try..”

po: “yeah its here.. take it. but coins should clink in my pocket”

cr: “oh.. no man.. this is not the one you showed me earlier.. this sucks!!”

po: “come on.. i remember it very well, this is the way it goes…”

cr: “no… no way, i swear.. this is not the one..”

po: “oh.. come on.. i know, this is the one..”

cr: ” no chance…”

po: “then damn it!, thoughts of coins clinking in my pocket will stay as an everlasting illusion”

cr: “its nothing like that, you can always improve upon..”

po: “leave it man..”

Neither of them knew what the earlier one was, one out of sheer complacency and one out of the inborn urge to criticize, just battled it.Life moves on. Some push it, delivering incisive criticisms.Some just dont give an ear to it, be it for the good or bad. ever and ever.. life moves on!… alibiing..

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  1. chunds said, on August 7, 2005 at 5:32 pm

    that sounds like my biograpry, i happen to do the very same thing!! atleast with the poems 😉

  2. Anonymous said, on August 8, 2005 at 5:43 am

    hello classh!
    whats up dude?
    How are the classes going?
    Here Iam still undergoing training.

  3. hope and love said, on August 9, 2005 at 12:22 pm

    ya.. such a frustrating feeling.. losing what u write in a moment of inspiration..
    u may never write it again..

  4. chunds said, on August 9, 2005 at 5:09 pm

    that is so true…. happens to me all the time.

  5. W-Bix said, on September 17, 2005 at 6:46 am


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